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The faces I once knew,
Haunting now,
Like spectres,
And places I visited,
Crafted on a canvas,
The faded colours mingle,
Merge to form an oily swirl,
A tangled web of criss crossed fabrics,
A mesh of interlocking threads,
CRASH,
The wall shatters,
Fragments of life scatter,
Splinter under foot,
No veil is left,
No mask to hide the shame,
Conceal the rotting, disintergrating debris,
Of the once proud portrait,
Burdened flesh,
Gleaming in the moonlight,
The wrinkles and blemishes,
The shaking hand,
So vulnerable now,
Stripped bare,
Naked on the floor,
As it was in the beginning,
The secret garden,
Vibrant and alive,
But what became of that idyllic scene?
So innocent were we,
That whisper though,
IUndetected it crept in,
Filled our minds,
Seeping poison,
Dark, black,
Yet strangely white as well,
How deceiving that was,
Neither are true colours,
The real rainbow is not there to be seen,
That vibrant paint,
Lining our innards,
Smeared on our souls,
An unseen pallet,
So who could trully stand there now,
Alone,
Centre stage,
Glaring, blinding spotlight,
Search light,
Say they didn't play a part,
They were an extra on the set,
Background noise,
A passer by,
An onlooker,
We all had our role,
All changed our lines,
Re-wrote the script,
Bu there was no escaping inevitability,
The crash scene had to happen,
It was written there,
In black and in white,
We were all under the same sky,
Just before it happened,
All saw the same pale moon,
In its omnicient splendour,
It knew that no one would survive,
You see you can scorn for a while,
Mock individuality,
But in the end,
All lives collide,
Crash,
It is then that you will realise,
All that the stage directions meant,
So re-paint the canvas,
Tender the garden,
Piece together the shattered wall,
Prevent the crash,
And find out how the story really goes.
©2006-2009 ~SOPHIADEPP
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Author's Comments

Inspired by the film Crash which is so incredibly awesome that i can't describe its awesomeness. if you have not seen it yet then you just have to because it's one of the best films i've ever seen in my entire life. it's so powerful and very very truthful. also slightly inspired by the picture of dorian gray by oscar wilde as this novel rocks my socks!

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I like how the short lines and words really push you along- it gives the poem a lot of momentum, and by the time you get to the end of it, you wanna read it all over again. Nice images, and I also like how it ends making you want more.

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I WILL NOT TALK RUBBISH. (Except on Wednesdays.)
Walter- Shut the fuck up, Donny.
Are the fires of hell a'glowing? Is the grisly reaper mowing?
:iconsophiadepp:
Thankyou Laura! I really appreciate that. I wasn't sure about the ending but then again i never am when it comes to poetry but you saying that has actually made me very pleased with a piece of my poetry for once! Seriously though that film is bloomin' awesome. You should watch it!

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:iconsylverstrike:
Yeah, I really wanna! It's been on my 'to watch' list for a while. :D

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I WILL NOT TALK RUBBISH. (Except on Wednesdays.)
Walter- Shut the fuck up, Donny.
Are the fires of hell a'glowing? Is the grisly reaper mowing?
:iconsophiadepp:
so it should be! It really moved me in a way that no other film has, even my favest film ever.

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:iconsylverstrike:
Really? Wow...Well, I'll make sure I'll see it at some point.

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:strip:
I WILL NOT TALK RUBBISH. (Except on Wednesdays.)
Walter- Shut the fuck up, Donny.
Are the fires of hell a'glowing? Is the grisly reaper mowing?
:iconsophiadepp:
It's so clever the ways all the characters lives link together and just the meanings behind it just show our society up as being a complete just, mess like thing!

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:iconphoenixsparrow:
ooh, awesomatron.

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STAY IN YOUR BOX! EAT YOUR FUDGE!
...but of course beauty is transient and one day you and I will both die... and there will be nought but dust!
Not today though, today's gonna be lovely!
:iconsophiadepp:
Well that's a new one. Thankies for the highly detailed comment!

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this was the really long one that i couldn't be bothered to read!! sorry that i didn't do it earlier, but this is brilliant!

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shut up and die

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